Ain't Afraid of Nothin' (Reprise)

So for the past half week or so I've been pretty self-conscious about my first go at this idea. Her eyes were too small and far apart and her muzzle was just ... weird. And I forgot her eyelashes and freckles. Oops. Anyhoo, here's try two. I was in the middle of submitting this moments ago with the note of 'I didn't make the yellow part of the hat large enough' before I realized I still had the file open in Sai and the only thing standing between me and fixing it was, well, me. So I fixed it. It looks a tad like a Rasta hat but I just figure it's holding her mane so.. it.. makes sense? Sure.

A mixture of soft and sharp highlights with sharp shading. Does it at least look passable? Let me know! :3

e: I just remembered that I forgot to mention that this idea was posited by NotSoSubtle of Valor is Magic fame. :3